tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9107933025395069560.post431733048363743825..comments2024-01-01T21:20:36.142+13:00Comments on Von: Weekly Activities/ Day 5/ Bonus Activity SPX Blog Admin 2http://www.blogger.com/profile/16528806958580752607noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9107933025395069560.post-78841344877681691722017-01-16T11:02:35.281+13:002017-01-16T11:02:35.281+13:00Hi Von,
This is a really well written story, than...Hi Von,<br /><br />This is a really well written story, thank you for sharing with us all! I like how much detail you have given us throughout your story, and your spelling as well as the punctuation is excellent.<br /><br />I wonder how your phone got damaged?? Maybe someone else used it when you weren't looking and accidentally damaged it without telling you? Hopefully this isn't quite the end of the story... I'd love to know what happens next!<br /><br />P.S. What a great addition with your story board! How did you make that? It tells us your story so well, and really helps to describe what's going on. I'm so impressed with your work here Von, this is awesome!<br /><br />Cheers,<br />Dan.Dan Abricossowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14179679544343669201noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9107933025395069560.post-10062732645580272002017-01-04T11:04:24.708+13:002017-01-04T11:04:24.708+13:00Hey Von
That is a great story. I like how you adde...Hey Von<br />That is a great story. I like how you added a storyboard to show what happened in the story. Nice job.<br />Danieldanielhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11600538330930746154noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9107933025395069560.post-12020832882168056082016-12-20T19:06:28.016+13:002016-12-20T19:06:28.016+13:00Hi Von,
Willy here, and I'm part of the comme...Hi Von,<br /><br />Willy here, and I'm part of the commenting team for the S.L.J programme these summer holidays. I enjoyed reading your story, and I admire the way you added a storyboard to go along with it - it really gives me a sense of what the story looks like.<br /><br />Good job!<br />-WillyWilly L.https://www.blogger.com/profile/01845467170689378698noreply@blogger.com