MY- DLO SHOWS THAT JESUS WAS A MODEL TEACHER.......
Friday, 26 August 2016
Thursday, 25 August 2016
Friday, 19 August 2016
MY NARRATIVE WRITING / WRITING DOWN MY OWN STORY THAT CAN RELATE OR IS LINKED TO MY FIRST SENTENCE .....
I found a strange package by the door. Could this really be my new Ipad! I smiled with delight.
I slowly unwrapped the package. I got too nervous
that I accidentally ripped the package wide open.
To my disappointment. Inside the package was a
pair of two dollar sandals. I dropped to my knees and screamed "SERIOUSLY A PAIR OF TWO DOLLAR SANDALS!".
I was so overcome with my anger that I spend the whole day in my bedroom brooding.
Suddenly I was interrupted by a knock at the door. I ignored it . The knocking continued . A few minutes later the knocking stopped. I quickly ran to check who was it but when I arrived there was no one at the door. I must have been too late. Anyway I was so surprised to see that the pair of sandals has disappeared.
THE END…
Wednesday, 17 August 2016
MY UNFAMILIAR PET- Narrative writing
If only Pet’s could speak: Narrative writing
LEARNING: To use prompt to write a narrative story using good sentences.
“N-N-Nancy !” an unfamiliar voice cried. I straight away got out of bed and wondered if I heard a voice or was I just dreaming.
“Who is it “ I asked scratching my head in frustration. The unfamiliar voice did not replied. Suddenly I heard scratching at the door.
It was still night and I could not quite see where I was going .I found the door handle and opened the door. In front of me was an unfamiliar figure, staring at me with wide eyes.
“ Aaaargh” the figure screamed. I gave an unexpected scream too and kicked the figure out of my sight. I backed away and smashed the door shut.
My heart was pounding as never before. “Please go away… Please go away” I repeated. After a few moments the Voice cried again.
“ N-N-Nancy” it cried. I couldn't help it I quickly peeked through the door and saw my pet Loopi staring at me as if she was scared of me.
“ What…. My dog is talking?” I said in frustration. How could I be so stupid kicking my own pet in the middle of the night. I keeled down and patted her softly.
“ You really freaked me out Loopi “ I said smiling.
THE END.......
Tuesday, 16 August 2016
Friday, 12 August 2016
THE EVERY DAY SHOW!
EVERYDAY SHOW
The everyday show was very inspiring.
It made me think about my family situation and relationship.The show was quite emotional.Having the unhappy feelings in me. There is a very important message from the show. The message was that if you're a person like T whose parents relationship stumbles and fall.
Get help or talk to someone.
It made me think about my family situation and relationship.The show was quite emotional.Having the unhappy feelings in me. There is a very important message from the show. The message was that if you're a person like T whose parents relationship stumbles and fall.
Get help or talk to someone.
HOPEFULLY THE EVERYDAY SHOW COULD COME BACK TO OUR SCHOOL AGAIN!
OUR CROSS COUNTRY PRACTISE !
CROSS - COUNTRY : PRACTISE
Every Wednesday, Thursday and Friday Room 5 and 7 have their cross country practise.
I like running, it makes me fit. Although some students are not willing to run at all, perhaps power walking is much better than running. The reason why us students of St Pius do this is to help us exercise and lose a bit of our weight
because we have cross country coming up.
Wednesday, 10 August 2016
THE AMAZING NED SHOW!!!!
I AM LEARNING TO :Write good sentences.
Writing sentences that link to the main idea.
CONTINUING JESUS WORK
Monday, 8 August 2016
Friday, 5 August 2016
My Amazing Narrative Story
Characters - Girl troll (Nancy) , Boy Troll ( Paulie )
Setting - In the dark woods
Problem - Nancy loves to sing and make music but Paulie hates her singing and music that he can’t even have peace, quiet or sleep.
Title: The 2 Despicable Trolls
“ Hey are you asleep yet “ I whispered while I was staring at the stars floating in the sky. I felt lonely so I started singing , “ it's a wonderful night and the stars are shining bright...
“Seriously ,” yelled Paulie.
I ignored him and carried on singing. “ I’m warning you Nancy “. Paulie was frustrated he couldn't help it so he sat up and yelled at Nancy “ do you have ears or not didn't I tell you to zip your mouth “.
I sing and strummed my ukulele as I walked slowly to the darkness. Suddenly a magical thing happened, other creatures started to sing along with me. I couldn't help it I felt excited.
Paulie could not believe his eyes “ what in the world is happening here “ he whispered to himself.
I came closer to Paulie while the creatures faded behind the darkness.
“ Hey I have a song for you can I borrow your ukulele” he said unusually .
“Sure“ I said politely ,handing him my ukulele. Paulie quickly threw my ukulele to the fire
“ isn’t that better” he suggested.
I dropped to my knees “No” I cried tears filling my eyes.” Oh my sweet Ukulele “ whimpered Nancy .
“Look Nancy no one cares if your Uckele's gone especially me so stop crying and "GO TO SLEEP”. Before I could go to sleep I turn my attention to the fire seeing that it was next to where Paulie was sleeping. I blew the fire and it slowly died down . Right away Paulie shivered
“ Are you crazy why did you did that for?”. I couldn't bother to reply because I was already asleep. THE END
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