Description Writing ( Soul Friend )

My Soul Friend Angel

“Well” My soul friend’s name is Angel. She is a an amazing year 1 student from room 4, she is so grateful, loving and such a humble child.  I like how she shares her own thinking with me, I know that there is a great relationship between me and my soul friend, may I hope that I will be a good and caring person to my soul friend Angel.

Everyone has a great connection with their Soul  friend even though if they they don’t same habit or conduct they are still alike. Angel is my soul friend, I am responsible for her and we look after one another and care for each other is what true soul friends do. Most soul Friends share their joy and worries to one another. When my soul friend is hurting or crying it is my job to help  and make her feel much better.

Today is St Patrick's day It is also a time to celebrate our soul friends too. I remembered how father said in a high voice saying “ St Patrick wanted to be Jesus soul friend “ father had said. This idea of soul friend came from the Ireland country which the faith sisters had given the idea of soul friend to St Pius X School.

Through this year "Lord may I be a great and honerable model to my soul friend".

Narrative Structure from( Ants and the Grasshopper )

Week:7-11 of march.2016

Ants and the grasshopper

Narrative Structure

Hi, my name is Von and I am sharing with you today my narrative structure from my story The Ants and the Grasshopper and it is teaching us about survivals and how important it is to look after yourself and others.

My Basic Facts Result

               

STATION OF THE CROSS [ STATION: 6 ] VERONICA WIPES THE FACE OF JESUS

Station 6: Veronica wipes the face of Jesus.

[The Highlight has to do with Similes and Adjective words]

I struggled to move through the shouting crowds they shouted while they were walking forward following Jesus direction, they said “Crucify him crucify”.

My goodness  the crowds was as large as the ocean. I looked at Jesus with absolute sadness, I felt heartbroken just like losing a daughter. Jesus immediately left the ground and stood up still carrying the heavy cross, the cross looks  heavy as a rock. I fell to the ground with tears upon my face.

I looked up at Jesus, he was sweating and the blood running down from his head. Jesus looked at me, he knew who I was, I was the woman whose  name was Veronica. I  took a cloth and move forward,I wiped Jesus sweat and blood off his face.

I was crying, such a painful feeling. Jesus got himself up and was now on his way to Calvary hill, the path to Calvary hill was dusty. Jesus walked passed and meet some weeping woman with their children crying. I knew how it would felt to be losing someone very important to me and also the followers of Jesus Christ.

THE MEMORY WHEN JESUS DIED (TO FREE OUR SINS).

MATHS ABOUT ME!

                                                     

This picture is called MATHS ABOUT ME!

DUCK FALLS ( NARRATIVE WRITING)

                           

       THE   DUCK   FALLS

The little ducklings were wide awake now ready to explore their fun adventurers but suddenly they heard the sea splashing with great big waves. So the little ducklings left their warm and comfortable and were on their way down to the beach shore.
The little ducklings were staring at the sea with great amazement.

One duckling wanted to swim in the sea but he refuses to because she wasn't sure if it was safe to swim with those big waves. So she had an idea, she went right to the front of all the little ducklings and pushed the smallest little duckling down into the beach.


That little poor duckling who fell down was screaming for help but all the other little ducklings watch in silence.

The End

MY FUN HOLIDAY!

My fun Holiday!

My holidays were marvellous . First of all in the holidays, it was fun going to the airport to pick up my friend  who just arrived from Australia . I went with my mother and her friend Mehi which is Lenli Mum. I really hoped my friend  is happy to be back in New Zealand, but I know for sure that she was missing  Australia so much.

I was so happy to see my Friend Lenli again but It gave me frightful shocked that she could not quite remember who I was.

“ My  name is Voni ” I told her and she immediately spread her arms out wide and hugged me tight, she  told me that she remembered  who I was. My tears were running down my face and I couldn’t stop crying, I was crying because I was so happy to see Lenli . Mehi was filled with gladness and happiness to see her own daughter again.

Later on My mother was driving me, Mehi and Leni back to my house.We had a great welcome party for Lenli and I really had the most wonderful holiday I ever had.

That's it and I hope you really like my Holiday Writing!