Friday, 20 September 2013


On a cloudy day it was swimming at school. When I went to school the bell had already rung. Then I went to get changed.

After I had got changed I went to go and swim with the other girls.

When I got inside the swimming pool it was warm. We were happy because we were in the swimming pool which was lovely and warm.

After that we were learning some skills. We were swimming fast because we wanted our team to win, but we were slow because of me. I was tired of swimming. After swimming we had free time. We were happy because we always have fun every day and we love swimming. It is fun and it is my favourite thing to do. I love swimming all the time.

By Von


  1. Hi Von
    I like how you talk about swimming. Von I can picture what you have written and it feels like I want to go to the swimming pools but I can't I have to do my work at school.
    What is you favorite game in the swimming pool?
    From Petra-Rose.

  2. Hi von
    I love how you explain the day of where you were swimming. I can picture what you have written.
    What is your favorite game at the swimming pools?
    From Petra-Rose.